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Comment on My ussual day by Mara

Mara — Fri, 17 Oct 2008 01:41:29 +0000

By the way, I found your USB.

Comment on My ussual day by Mara

Mara — Fri, 17 Oct 2008 01:27:32 +0000

Hello Steven!

You misspelled the word “usual” on your title. Rephrase your first sentence to “6:30 and then wash my face and take a shower”. Add the word “and” after school on your third sentence. In addition, take out one “l” on “untill”. You used the dead word “get”. Capitalize the words “wednesday” and “i”.Add a comma before “i” on the fifth sentence. Add another comma after the word “that” on your last sentence.

That’s all.

Comment on My ussual day by Linh

Linh — Fri, 17 Oct 2008 01:18:46 +0000

your life is boring…or it’s too short(you poor thing).
but at least you still have a life not like me…
well,your paragraph is such…a grammar!!!!
and when you said you get out of school, it sounds like you getting out of jail or something.
last comment: “IT’S TOO BORING, your life i mean”

Comment on Want ad poster by Nicole

Nicole — Fri, 10 Oct 2008 01:18:19 +0000

This is Mara, Terry, and Tiff:

Your glogster background doesn’t match the topic’s era. It has to look like something in the old times. Your font size should be larger so people can read it. Terry and Mara say the music doesn’t match the topic either.

Comment on Hello world! by Mr WordPress

Mr WordPress — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 04:12:13 +0000

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